Corrections (2) ---hey, good to see tt u hv corrected some mistakes i pointed out =)

1) I stayed in the lounge => I stayed at lounge

2) Hong Kong comedic love story => comedic love story by Hong Kong

3) My friend asked me, which one will you take => My friend asked me, which one you will take

4) give her all what I can do => give her all of what I can do

5) I also bought the airticket for flying back to China
for flying back => (cancel)

6) Just found an agency where the ticket is cheaper than others and the service is also very good
also => still

7) it is all ok for me how you call me as long as you feel comfortable
=> u can call me anything u like, it is perfectly ok for me as long as u feel comfortable

8) i more like Zhe => I like Zhe more

9) You have done so many things at 9:30
at => by

10) My alarm clock will ring every 8 mins
will ring => rings

11) I got up every 8 mins and totally it is 15 time
totally it is 15 time => it is 15 times in total

12) i am gonna crazy in the days without it
am gonna => went

13) A BIG, red-black-stripe and moving mosquito is flowing in my soup
flowing => floating or swimming

14) it is at 颈椎, which is every easy to get hurt
=> 'is' and 'to' cannot appear together

15) i even never heard of that movies
even never => never even

16) Great care for love is needed by both people.
people => parties



From 14/05 to 15/05