Corrections (3) ---yup tts all =) nice writing, man~

1) when this email is sent...

is => was

2) I got up as early as u are...

are => did

3) finish at one time

one time => one go

4) drag it very long

=> drag it for very long

5) It is really like a torturing.

torturing => torture

6) doesn't require any softwares

softwares => software

7) from another angel...

angel => angle

8) Luckily now it is not the problem facing us yet

facing => faced by

9) I also got the habit to split my sleeping time

to split => of spliting

10) Feel very irritating that I lost all my songs

irritating => irritated

11) The participator chooses one case...

participator => participant

12) dreams don't make ur life ABUNDANT
abundant => colorful or rich

13) i just got to know when i entered the cinema.

know => know it

14) maybe u want to kno the difference between 'which' and 'that' when u build a clause. the two can interchange, but most of the time, the clause following 'which' is something that can be erased without major change of the point of the sentence, while the clause following 'that' carries exactly what u want to say in this whole sentence.

example:

My house is just that building, WHICH has been there for 5 years.

In fact i used some software THAT can adjust the game speed.

15) It will be good if you don't know the episode.

episode => plot

16) you can just continue where you stop the old one.

continue => continue from, stop => stop in

17) I also take note down the musics which appeared at 933.

musics => music (or pieces of music)

18) Different people sent me msg all together~!

=> all sent me msg at the same time

19) it is something new that you never tried

never tried => have never tried

20) furthermore, "a bunch of messy" is today's tendency

tendency => tend

21) I am sure you have seen some of his movies

seen => watched

22) something is to be brought to France. not 'is to bring to France'... (Question?)

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